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Hi everyone, i want to work in something serious, and when i saw this topic, i decided to make a story, because i don´t have drawing skills or things like that, now i present you my work:
Luigi´s Adventure!
This story will put Luigi as the main character, on an amazing and exciting adventure, you will surely want to know how all started, here i put you the prologue
It was a normal day in Mushroom Kingdom, Mario and Luigi were resting at their house, Mario was revealing another of his stories to Luigi, until Luigi says: Luigi: Hey Bro, do you want to go to Bubble Lake? Bubble Lake was a really relaxing and pretty place, Mario agreed, and together they departed to Bubble Lake. When they got to the place, the lake was beautiful, Mario and Luigi were happy until...
They spotted a ship, it was surely from the Evil King of the Koopas, Bowser, Mario and Luigi jumped to action!
Mario and Luigi were running with all speed, stomping on goombas and koopas, that time without action didn´t affected them in nothing, they got in the castle defeating every enemy that they found, after defeating 2 hammer bros. , they did reached to the throne room, bowser was there, with his loyal assistant, Kammy Koopa, Bowser was focused on defeating Mario, Kammy was going to take out Luigi, Peach and Toadsworth were watching the battle.
A fierce battle was unleashed, Luigi avoided all Kammy´s attacks, and then he jumped right in Kammy´s head, Kammy fainted, saying ¨i am sorry King Bowser, i have failed you...¨
Mario´s battle wasn´t so different, he defeated Bowser, but after he faints, he revealed to everyone a black book, he said ¨Now Kammy...DO IT!¨ Kammy woke up, and saying some strange words, a portal showed up to everyone, this portal absorbed Peach and Mario, then Bowser entered with Kammy, shouting that he finally won, and then they dissapeared...
Luigi was too sad, he started crying, thinking that he lost his brother and one of his best friends, until Toadsworth closed to him and said;
Toadsworth: Don´t cry master Luigi, i understand your sadness, but now is up to you to save your Brother and the Princess.
Luigi:... i think that is true... i will do it...
so he went to his house, took some mushrooms and fire flowers and then he went out, shouting at the sky Don´t worry my friends, i will rescue you! A new adventure starts...for Luigi
Luigi departed in his adventure, but there were more problems around the kingdom...
Bowser´s plans were really evil, he planned to get the star road again, but he wasn't worried about Luigi, he doesn't think that he will show up and ruin his plans...
Bowser: Hey Kammy, when are you going to open that portal, i want that Star Road in MY POWAH! (lol reference)
Kammy was detecting that Bowser´s ambitions were getting higher with time, but as a loyal assistant, she can't do anything with it.
Kammy: Don't worry you Greatness, i will open the portal in no time, by the way, what are you planning to do with Luigi?
Bowser: What? that greenie? hahahaha, don't make me laugh, he will not do nothing, he will hide like the chicken he is, and besides if he shows up i will already have the Star Road in my power
Kammy: Sir, don't have over confidence, remember what happened with ge-
Bowser: SHUT UP! don't remember me that, it was a mistake from the past, i don't think he will show up NOW...
???: Maybe, who knows King Bowser...
Bowser: HEH? what are you doing here?
A misterious person appeared in front of Bowser, his eyes made Bowser´s mood go to fury...literally...
Bowser: HEY, SERIOUSLY I DON'T WANT YOU HERE IN MY CASTLE, I WILL PUNCH YOU OUT OF MY CASTLE RIGHT NOW!
???: Hehehehe, rude as usual, but i, Fawful, will ruin your plans... I HAVE EPICNEZ!
Kammy: ( This guy is so weird )
Bowser: Ruin my plans? you can't, i have this book in my POWA- wait, Kammy where is the book?
Kammy: But my Mindless Sir, you had it to read more about his powers.
Bowser then looked inmediatly to Fawful
Fawful: I HAVE CHORTLES, your stupid guards didn't noticed that i changed of outfit and then i transformed in a koopa and i came here to stole the book.
Bowser: WHAT? that means that...
10 Minutes Earliers...
Koopa: Sir, i came here to report that we are already invading Mushroom Kingdom and sacking their towns... SIR WATCH OUT! IS DARK BOWSER!
Bowser: WHERE? wait there is nothing there, GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I BURN YOU!
Actual Stupid Minutes
Bowser: i can't believe i falled in such an old trick.
Fawful: My plan is going really good, now i must go, bye bye King of the Rock Heads
Bowser: That is actually insulting, Kammy can you still make the portal?
Kammy: It's finished sir, and don't worry about Fawful, he will not make too much without knowing how to do the spells.
Bowser: Excellent, we shall depart now!
Luigi was walking until 2 persons were walking behind him, Luigi quickly jumped in the taller person, then the person fainted.
Luigi: Wario, Waluigi! what are you doing by following me
Wario: he...hehe, nothing bad, we came to you for help
Luigi: ....
Luigi stopped breathing, after a few seconds of heavy silence, Luigi started laughing so hard that he fell in the ground
Wario: This... is not a joke, our houses are getting invaded by some green guys, and they are fighting with bowser's army just in fron of our houses, me and Waluigi we need to get to the bottom of this and go to Bowser's castle, but we can't go alone ourselves.
Luigi: so you don't follow my bro's example and go alone Wario?
Wario: Don't make jokes, we seriously need your help and Mario´s help, where is he anyway
Luigi: he got kidnapped by Bowser, i must save him.
Wario: ....
After heavy seconds of silence, Wario started laughing so hard that he fell in the ground...
Luigi: So you wanted help... right?
Wario: You accept then?
Luigi: yeah i will need your help, Let's a go!
Luigi, with his 2 new Allies, Wario and Waluigi, departed to Bowser's castle, but in middle of the way, they found a tremendous war between Bowser's army and Fawful's Army, It was incredible, Bowser was winning this fight, and then they unleashed his strongest warrior in the battlefield, The Goomba King
Wario: hehehe, looks like they saw us
Waluigi: That mean that we must...fight?
Luigi: Yes, get ready, he is coming
Waluigi: ( he sounds so sure of himself, from where he got that confidence )
Will Luigi win this battle with his 2 new and useful allies? more is coming in chapter 2
Chapter 2 is here
Spoiler:
Chapter 2: No Peace for the Bros.!
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Goomba King revealed a weird crystal, and a dark fire was around him, he shot a blast of dark fire, Luigi and Waluigi were quick enough to avoid it, but Wario didn't run the same luck, he ended toasted and fainted down...
Goomba King: HAHAHAHAHA, this power is enormous, King Bowser, here on the battlefield, i will DESTROY ALL OUR ENEMIES, WATCH THE POWER OF THE DARK CRYSTAL!!!!
Luigi: What are you talking about?
Goomba King: Calmation, i will not reveal the magnificent power of the Dark Crystal, which can offers you the unlimited power of darkness, but with a price...
Waluigi: a pricey?
Goomba King: I told you that i will not tell you anything, the price is something beyond the limits of your understandings, you have to short your live to the half!
Luigi and Waluigi: !!!
Luigi and Waluigi cannot believe it, the Goomba King shorted his live in order to get the full power of darkness...
Waluigi: I don't care if you have the power of dirkness, you are going down!!!
Waluigi quickly hits the Goomba King with his racket tennis, but the damage was of...
1 (lulz)
Waluigi got hitted by the Goomba King, and fainted...with Wario and Waluigi at his side he could win, but he is now alone...anyone can save him?
Meanwhile...
Bowser: Finally... the STAR ROD! GWAHAHAHA
Kammy: Congratulations Sir Bowser, i am sure you are thinking in your first wishes, aren't you?
Bowser: First, i will erase Mario from the existence
After saying those words, Mario and Peach appeared in front of bowser.
Peach: BOWSER!
Bowser: be happy Princess...
Bowser uses the star road to paralyze her, then he does the same with Mario
Bowser: Today is the day that i will eliminate you FROM THE FACE OF THE WORLD... ALL THOSE DEFEATS IN SUPER MARIO BROS... THAT PITIFULLY DEFEAT IN SUPER MARIO BROS 3, MY LAME PERFORMANCE IN SUPER MARIO 64... MY STUPIDNESS IN PAPER MARIO, AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST MY DEFEAT IN SUPER MARIO GALAXY!, i will settle all those scores now... POWER UP NOW!
Bowser start charging a deep breath of fire
Bowser: GOOD BYE MARIO!!!
But when he just shot his fire breath, someone appeared and broke the star road in 2 pieces, quickly Mario evaded the fire and Bowser went really...really angry...
Who saved Mario from the death was Geno, After that, Geno shot a Geno Beam, which left Bowser unconscious, after that...
Peach: Geno! thanks for rescuing Mario, i tought that it was a game over for him...
Mario thanked Geno too
Peach: But what are you doing here? i tought you did transformed in a star and then went to the Star Road...
Geno: *sigh* i was going to make this alone, but this became harder that i expected, i will explain you both what is happening...
Geno explained:
Geno: Bowser tried to get the star road some weeks ago, but I stopped him , Bowser sure tought he was going to need a secret weapon if i or mario appears, so he got the Legendary Book of Spells, a book that can help you to make every spell that exists, after that, i watched how he invaded mushroom kingdom, with that book, he was going to defeat me for sure, so it wasn't going to be an smart move, so i went to the Star Heaven and waited for him, without the book i easily broke the star road so he can't have his power...
Peach: wow, oh well, now that you defeated Bowser...
Fawful: I HAVE CHORTLES, FAIL!
A cage fell over Mario and Peach, Geno evaded the cage
Geno: Darn it, i must rescue you!
Peach: Geno no, go with Luigi, i am sure he will help you, don't worry about us!
Mario: Yes!
Fawful: YOU WILL NOT!
Fawful fired a beam to Geno, but he failed...
Geno: See ya!
Geno dissapeared. from there...
Meanwhile...
Luigi was getting tired of avoiding all the fire beams of Goomba King, so he fell on the ground...
Goomba King: Hahahaha, yes! i have won, say goodbye...Greenie...
Luigi:!
Luigi was already getting tired of being called Greenie or stuff like that, so he ate a fire flower and he started to throw big fire balls to the goomba king!
Goomba King: No wait, that is useless!, you will not win!
Geno suddendly appeared behind of the goomba king, and fired the Geno B, with his Beam and the big fire balls of luigi combined, Goomba king was defeated...
Luigi: mmmm i know you... you helped my bro to defeat Smithy, what are you doing here?
Geno: Don't worry Wigi, i will explain you everything.
Geno Explained the whole story to Luigi
Luigi: Fawful it's also involved... so what we can do?
Geno: He have already learned how to use the book, so we must go to the legendary Library and find the book that can destroy every spell casted, the problem is that the libray is in Crystal Kingdom, and we can't take so much time to get there, you know a way Luigi?
Luigi: I know a person that can make us a plane, we must go back to the mushroom kingdom right now!
Geno: Ok then, let's go
Luigi and Geno departed to Mushroom Kingdom, but they were forgetting about something aren't they?
Luigi: ups, now that i remember! Wario! Waluigi!
They Both waked up, and they went to meet with Luigi:
Luigi: you will help us to restore peace to the world?
Wario: whatever, i will sure get rich and famous when we finish with this! i will help
Waluigi: if Wario goes, i will go!
Luigi: good, now let's a go!
Luigi and his friends departed to mushroom kingdom, what will new adventures awaits them? see more in the next chapter!
Last edited by AlexisLUIGI14 on Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:59 pm, edited 4 times in total.
I am planning to give almost every mario character some credit in the story, at least once, so i will try to combine the stories of Luigi ,Mario and the mysterious character that saved Mario, but i am sure at least one person kowns who is him, but of course Luigi´s part will be more important, the tittle says all
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